Opinion Question Types – Band 5 vs Band 8

To truly understand the gap between Band 5 and Band 8, it helps to see the difference side by side.
Both essays may address the same topic, but the quality of expression, structure, and logic sets them apart.

The Same Question

“Some people think success in life depends on hard work, while others believe it depends on luck. Discuss both views and give your opinion.”

Band 5 Example (Average Response)

“Some people think hard work is important but luck is also needed.
People who are lucky can get more chances.
But if people work hard they can get success.
So I think both are important for life.”

Analysis:

• Opinion: Unclear (agrees with both sides without strong reason).
• Grammar: Basic; missing articles and transitions.
• Vocabulary: Simple and repetitive (important, success, people).
• Structure: No real paragraphing or logical flow.
• Task Response: Too short and underdeveloped.

Score Range: Band 5.0–5.5
Shows understanding but lacks control, clarity, and detail.

Band 8 Example (Advanced Response)

“Although luck can occasionally open doors, I firmly believe that consistent hard work is the real key to lasting success.
Hard work builds skills, persistence, and self-confidence, qualities that luck alone cannot replace.
For example, students who study daily often outperform those who rely on last-minute luck.
Therefore, while luck might create opportunities, it is effort that determines achievement.”

Analysis:

• Opinion: Clear, consistent, and strong.
• Grammar: Complex yet accurate; varied sentence types.
• Vocabulary: Topic-specific and precise (persistence, achievement, determines).
• Structure: Organized into clear logical ideas.
• Task Response: Fully developed with reasoning and example.

Score Range: Band 8.0–8.5
Shows clarity, control, and depth, exactly what examiners reward.